A long time ago in California Sep 15,1964 a girl was born she had a life full of secrets and not many friends
on her thirteenth birthday she fell of a swing and and landed on a Buch full of thorns when she stood up she was
bleeding, she started crying, what little friends she had leather there and didn't want to hang out with her any more
so. 10 years later-sat,she graduated and became a very importent women, she was getting married .but she had a
horrible secret she was keeping form her future husband who had later found her journal of secrets the women fought
that night and called off the wedding the women was sad she wanted to learn which craft and incant her future husband
to believe in anything so she says and to fall madly love with her she then receives a call from her future husband to
got back together. the wedding pass live happy together for a few more years. But after the women started to get
annoyed by him, she then started to go to parties, and found another man who she liked then she started to get
acquainted with Jim, who she had liked for a while. Then the women and Jim decided to become a couple and the killed
her husband to run away with a richer, and much younger man.
Then one there was a knock at the door. At the door there was a man standing there. He told her he knew her secrets
and he would expose her for all the crazy things that she's done in her life. Although she tried living a normal life,
her past always caught up to her. But instead she decided to kill the man at the standing at the door. Jim decided to
help her. "Could I help kill all who have used and make him first?" Jim asked. "Yes." She replied.
They started with Jim's brother, then his dad, then his aunt. He then, finally, killed her because he always knew the
truth. He was the one who helped her get rid of her journal. She may have been crazy but, he was crazy. He was not
going to stop. He was ready to kill. He knew that she was just using him but, she did not realize that he was using
her and stalking her before she met him.
Student's Choice Semester I & II Reflection Questions
List one thing you've learned from writing this paper that you have applied to other writing assignments. I learnd that description is a key point in this paper i have learnd how to add extra words I don't need and the element of suprize
Identify a challenge you faced while writing this paper (this can be at any stage of the writing process). How did you overcome the challenge? What did you learn? A challenge I faced was that i am not good at detail and I like to get straight to the point.
What genre does this paper fit? How do you know? This story is falling in the middel of horror and mistory
Given more time to work on this paper, how would you improve it? I Would make my story long.
Why did you choose to include this paper? What do you want me to learn about you as a writer? my story includs mistory and action. A thing I learnd on that I am a slow writer.